Hiding Halloween

Hiding behind
who I wish I was
calling on strangers
to compliment my facade
Hoping I can just
remain here, under cover
watching the world pass by
on this spooky, candy night.



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11 responses to “Hiding Halloween

  1. kez

    ohhhh wishing to be a monster ….not sure that’s what I would wish for …love the tempo of this thank you x

  2. your mindset on Halloween night is well captured here,

    a few lines, you speak a lot.


  3. very nice.. tight and meaningful….you might want to edit your spelling of Halloween….

    have a good halloween ~

  4. You capture the mod of many with regard to Halloween night. Well done!


  5. I like the way you have added a sense of sadness into this boisterous celebration.

  6. Very well expressed poem. You might as well come out of the closet and admit it – you’re a Pagan!

  7. It kinda sounds a bit like everyday life. Sometimes you want to just hide and observe.

  8. So, you don’t like it… 🙂

    I have nominated you for The Versatile Blogger Award:


  9. Glad to see you find a place to hide.

    a piece well done.

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